Critique of project one

Well I'm moderately happy with the way my piece went over in class, as well how I myself felt about it. I would say there were things that I would have liked to have changed but that's not exactly right. I actually think I would just like to make some alternates to the ones I already did. During my expanded time piece I would like to take just a part of the piece and expand that even further. With the compressed peice there was actually a montage or series of scenes that I wanted to add at the end. I really enjoyed this project and it has already inspired me to do more like it. I really like the idea of playing with time